Tales of the Planes No.2

Started by JaCe BeLeReN, July 19, 2012, 03:50:49 PM

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JaCe BeLeReN

A Lore Article
By JaCe BeLeReN

The Infinite Consortium

                  These thing my paranoid mind created untill finally when I made it home and went to bed exhausted, I was almost reading for the imp that woke me up to "test" me. Almost ready....

                 The imp hissed at me demanding an answer. "Why am I here mind reader? Why am I here.... Jace? Through a haze of pain I briefly realized it knew my name. No one should know my name. I tried to focus my mental energy, the poison coursing through my veins not helping. "
           
         Your summoner...." I chocked out.
           
           "a mage called Gemreth... and his master is... A man called Tezzeret." The imp cackled
 
        "Good mindreader, good. What else?"

           "Tezzeret wand to meet with me.... A tavern called  the First Vineyard. This was a test!" I shouted in indignation.

             "Yes mindreader and you passed."
   
          " Antidote..." I chocked out.

             "Heh heh, poisons not lethal" It cackled at it flew out my door.

               I lay on my bed, through pain and humiliation. I vowed to show this Tezzeret that I was not to be trifled with.

              The next day I want to visit an old friend. An elf named Emmara.
"Hello Berrim" she greeted me happily. " What brings you here?" She and I exchanged idle chat while enjoying some elvin pastries until I finally addressed the reason I was here. "What" I asked "do you know about a man named Tezzeret and the Infinite Consortium?" I learned that the Consortium could find anything one could possible want. They could find, use, create, and kill whenever they wanted to. Arming myself with this information (and a pastry or two) I set of to the First Vineyard. To find this Tezzeret, and what he wanted from me.

Thorn


Brandalog

Very nicely done. You've got me pretty interested :o

JaCe BeLeReN

A word of advice young planeswalkers
1. If Tezzeret of Bolas ever want to talk to you. Talk to them. Say "Maybe" then walk to a different plane, and don't stay on any one play for more than a year for the next 5 years. This fiasco got my best friend killed... But that comes later....

smokin terry

I am really liking these a lot keep it up.

AgrusKos

Very good. I'm gonna start reading articles.

remasuri ger


Kuberr

Honestly. Way too many "I's"

Should talk about setting and not just about "I" the character.

Piotr

I thought he was pretty selfish, just as I am?

cltrn81

I enjoy the first person perspective it is a completely different read that you do not see very often.......the "I's" are cool with me 👍