Article Series: Hatching Plans

[Remillo]

Hey guys!  So, I've come to know a site and Podcast that focuses on EDH, known as CommanderCast.  Not only do they have Podcasts, but they also have articles that go up from various writers.  I'm fortunate enough to be the newest writer on their roster!  My first series basically focuses on my love of brewing:  People give me stupid ideas, and I try to make them in to a deck.  Seems simple enough, but when you start playing with some of the worst cards and interactions in Magic, things can get weird.

So, I present to you, people of iMTG, my first article published on a website:

Hatching Plans: The Sorrow of Ragnar
http://tinyurl.com/ragnarssorrow

Feedback and ideas are appreciated!

[rarehuntertay]

Good read. I like it. Interesting idea. Just a few questions for you though. Do you have an editor? I noticed a few grammatical errors in your articles that made go grrr... lol
Second: On ideas to prevent or redirect damage from {Sorrow's Path}, did you consider {Pariah}? That way you the damage that Path would do to you would instead be directed at {Stuffy Doll}, which would then hit the opponent. There is also {Pariah's Shield}, though that is an equipment...

[DimirOverlord1300]

"I noticed a few grammatical errors in your article that MADE GO GRRR." Lol

[Mlerner12]

"Oh, there once was a hero named Ragnar the red who came riding to Whiterun from ole' roriksteaaad
The bragger did swagger and brandish his blade as he told of bold battles and gold he had maaaaade
But went silent did Ragnar when he met the shield maiden Matilda who saaaaaid
"Oh you talk and you lie and you drink all our mead and I think it's high time that you lie down and bleeeeed"
And then there came clashing and thrashing of steel as the brave lass Matilda charged in full of zeeeeal,
And the braggart named Ragnar was boastful no moooore
When his ugly red head rolled around on the floor."

On topic: I really liked it! You missed a couple commas but the article was really good!

[rarehuntertay]

"I noticed a few grammatical errors in your article that MADE GO GRRR." Lol

Lol type faster than I think at times lol. Perfect example of why you shouldn't proofread your own work