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Started by LordJanova, May 11, 2014, 12:33:39 PM

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DylanW18

Lol it needs to say "Creatures do not untap during their controller's untap step"

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Yeah please call me out on wording, I never have been good at it D:

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Keevoth, Splitter of Planes   {G}{G}{G}{G}{3}
Legendary Creature - Dragon

Flying
Keevoth, Splitter of Planes cannot be the target of spells you control.
When Keevoth, Splitter of Planes enters the battlefield, exile all lands on the battlefield.
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player may play a land that has been exiled by Keevoth, Splitter of Planes.

"I shall move mountains, part seas, tear forests, split bayous, and level plains."
[7/8]

The1337Magician

Quote from: FlickerYourOwnIdentity on June 04, 2014, 10:46:57 PM
Keevoth, Spliter of Planes   {G}{G}{G}{G}{3}
Legendary Creature - Dragon

Flying
When Keevoth, Spliter of Planes enters the battlefield, exile all lands on the battlefield.
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player may play a land that has been exiled by Keevoth, Spliter of Planes.

"I shall move mountains, part seas, tear forests, split bayous, and level plains."
[7/8]
The way this is worded, you can play anyone else's lands. Is this intended? Also if you flicker him or if you recast him, it starts over. This is pretty OP.

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Yes it is intended to make you be able to take anyone's lands.  Maybe if I give him shroud we can get past the blinking problem

rarehuntertay

Shouldn't it be Splitter instead of Spliter in the name?
And think Shroud would be good on it

DimirOverlord1300

Quote from: rarehuntertay on June 05, 2014, 09:07:18 PM
Shouldn't it be Splitter instead of Spliter in the name?
And think Shroud would be good on it
I'd like it more as a drawback like he can't be the target of spells or abilities you control

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

1. Yes it should be splitter, I tend to make that mistake.
2. I wish I was able to make a way to keep the essence of green without using shroud.  Due to my over analysis of how something fits the color and typing.  Because of this, I hate something that has green with shroud. :(

Any ideas?

DimirOverlord1300

Quote from: FlickerYourOwnIdentity on June 05, 2014, 09:53:52 PM
1. Yes it should be splitter, I tend to make that mistake.
2. I wish I was able to make a way to keep the essence of green without using shroud.  Due to my over analysis of how something fits the color and typing.  Because of this, I hate something that has green with shroud. :(

Any ideas?
I still like my idea with "can't be the target of spells or abilities you control." It fits green in the way that it won't be tampered with, it only uses it's natural force.

The1337Magician

How about "When ~ leaves the battlefield, return it to your command zone" or something like that. That makes it somewhat unplayable outside of EDH though. Maybe "shuffle it into your library?"

The1337Magician

Yuhai, Plotter of Machinations       {1}{W}{U}{B}
Legendary Artifact Creature -- Human Artificer

When Yuhai enters the battlefield, search your library for an artifact card coting X or less where X is how much you paid for Yuhai. Put that card into your hand and shuffle your library.

Whenever an artifact enters the battlefield, draw a card.
                                                                      2/2

Sparkle Ninja

Your Mother {7} {R} {G}

Legendary creature-Demon

Your mother can only be cast of you have at least 22 creatures on the field.

IN MY HOUSE YOU LIVE BY MY RULES!!!

20/20

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Korvea, Spreader or Pestilence  {B}{B}{B}{4}
Legendary Creature - Dragon

Flying, Wither
At the beginning of your upkeep, put a plague counter on Korvea, Spreader of Pestilence.
At the end of your turn, distribute X -1/-1 counters among creatures on the battlefield, where X is equal to the number of plague counters on Korvea, Spreader of Pestilence.
"First your eyes will begin to rot from the inside out, then your lungs will fill with poisonous fluid, and then.  Well, let's just see if you live that long."
5/7

rarehuntertay

Quote from: FlickerYourOwnIdentity on June 07, 2014, 03:10:39 PM
Korvea, Spreader or Pestilence  {B}{B}{B}{4}
Legendary Creature - Dragon

Flying, Deathtouch
At the beginning of your upkeep, put a plague counter on Korvea, Spreader of Pestilence.
At the end of your turn, distribute X -1/-1 counters among creatures on the battlefield, where X is equal to the number of plague counters on Korvea, Spreader of Pestilence.
"First your eyes will begin to rot from the inside out, then your lungs will fill with poisonous fluid, and then.  Well, let's just see if you live that long."
5/7
Instead of death touch, I think infect would fit better flavor wise...

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

I see what you are saying, and it did cross my mind.  However a 5/7 flying infect is pretty great.  Add another effect to it, then you have to draw a line.  I just settled for Deathtouch in the end.  Maybe Wither would work better though!