The Life, Death, and Rebirth of Nekusar NSFW

[FlickerYourOwnIdentity]

Ok guys, I am in the process of writing a storyline for {Nekusar, The Mindrazer}.  Seeing as he doesn't really have one, I'm basically interpreting however the hell I want.  That means that this is an adult fanfiction.  Not because of graphic sex scenes (because that is frowned upon) but there is sexual content.  Sex is heavily implied, there is a sex scene (but not graphic and to be determined on the chapter soon I'll tell you.)  this is all what would happen in the setting that this is in (no not a .bore. house).  So to make this official let me put a rating

R: Sexual Content
     Language
     Violence
     Suggestive Themes

[Skyshadow731]

Lol. Can't wait to read it.

[FlickerYourOwnIdentity]

The Life, Death, and Rebirth of Nekusar

Chapter 1: The Prince

"A palace of light, shrouded in darkness.  Where will thy doors take me, and what will thine walls take me from."
       ~Salzai, Merchant of Many

   Nekusar rolled in his sheets as the morning sun shone through his window.  Sparkling ever so brightly, in the dark, stone room.  The wooden door was flung open as a man in a dingy frock strolled in.  He glanced over at the bed and quietly sighed to himself.  Wishing his master would wake himself sometimes.  Trying to make no sound as he walked in his sandals, he picked up a small wooden tray with wine.  Although he didn't quite approve of the lord's early appetite for a drink, it wasn't his place to scold.  Walking up next to the bed, he cleared his throat as loud as humanly possible.  After waiting a few moments, an outstretched hand emerged from the mountain of sheets.  After pouring some wine in a glass, he handed it over to his awaiting master, whom drank the whole glass, and handed it back.  Sitting up in his bed, Nekusar slowly opened his eyes, letting light peer in a little at a time.  He sat there for a moment, mentally preparing himself for the rest of the day.  He then swung his legs over the side of the bed, and let them touch the cold floor.  Slowly distributing weight on each foot, he stood.  He then held out his arm, which was lightly grabbed, and pulled in a general direction.  The two of them walked into the hall, and sleepily greeted anyone passing by.  A breeze brushed past thighs, as Nekusar absently looked down.  Even though he realized he was naked, he was coaxed into not caring with the help of the wine he had already drank.  Not many people passing cared either, as it had become a normal thing to see a long time ago.  After walking for some time, they came into a steamed room filled with Nekusar's brothers.  Each of them were a couple of years younger then Nekusar, and were quite shy about bathing in front of one another.  However when Nekusar stepped into  the heated bath next to them, they all calmed down because of his brotherly presence.  It took him awhile, but he finally remembered all of his brothers names so he could greet them.

   "Good morning Ficas, how has your servant been treating you this morning?"  Nekusar said as he winked.  Ficas blushed furiously, covering his manhood as he was aroused at the mention of his beautiful servant Rosala.  Nekusar chuckled at his brother's shyness as he turned to face his other brothers. "I assume your servants have attended to your primal needs as well." Nekusar said to the siblings in front of him.  Vestimus and Crusilis both bolted out of the bath covering themselves, hoping to salvage some dignity, while Drachvar, Provase, and Lachmare all blushed profusely as they furiously protested their brother's accusation.  All the while, a young Resval sat confused as his brothers fought among each other.

   "All I asked was if your servant were doing their jobs!" Nekusar playfully shouted out as he ran out of the bathroom shamelessly.

    "But that is not what you had implied at first!" Provase called back as help ran towards his brother, ditching all signs of dignity in the bath.  The two ran throughout the castle, passing through the most extravagant foyer, to the darkest corridors.  All up until they passed the throne room.

   Nekusar was dashing when he came to a sudden halt at the grand door to the throne room.  Provase caught up and nearly tackled him, but realized what his brother was doing.  A devilish grin spread across the two's faces as they opened the door just a crack.  Pressing up against the door to hear was Nekusar, and peering through the crack was Provase.  It was a pastime for the princes to spy on their father, sometimes doing the most idiotic things while intoxicated, maybe going through an important deal while saying everything wrong.  Sometimes if a boy was all by himself he could find himself a good show just by peering through the cracks.  But this situation didn't seem like any of those times, something quite different.

   "Salzai, I swear on my life that I will get your payments by the end of the winter solstice.  You just have to give me time." The king shakily said.
   
   "Well your highness, that's the problem.  I don't have a whole lot of time, and if I don't get my money soon, I will be forced to take my business elsewhere."  The mysterious man said.  The king quaked in his clothes, choosing his next words carefully.
   
   "We..a-are all out..."  The king sputtered out of his quaking lips.
 
   "All out of what?"
   
   "Money, gold, drink, food, we are out of it all.  I've been barely able to pay for you these last few times."  The king whispered.

   "Oh, you're really out of everything?"  The mysterious man said as he strolled around the throne room.  "Well, I could always take this golden throne of yours."  The man said sweeping his arm over the throne.  The gold melted away and rose to the palm of his outstretched hand.  Soon it formed a large ball where it hardened, and fell onto his hand.

  Provase was baffled as he slowly backed away from the door.  Nekusar watched him and wondered what was the matter.

  "Provase what happened?!"  Nekusar urgently whispered.  Provase tried to answer, but just kept speaking incoherently.  Nekusar gave up on his brother, and went back to listening.  Only to here a quick statement.  Something about taking something else.  Suddenly a rumble shook the castle.  Nekusar flung the door open to see liquified stone walls moving towards a growing stone block next to a man and his father.  The man glanced over at Nekusar, a cruel smile playing upon his lips.  He looked over at the king and motioned towards the prince.

   "I'll take that too."

[FlickerYourOwnIdentity]

I realize it was short, but it was more like a filler to introduce situations and characters.

Hope you all liked it!

[Skyshadow731]

Maybe you could describe the characters a lil bit more to give the reader a better image of the characters and surroundings. But other than that it's seems really good so far.

[FlickerYourOwnIdentity]

Maybe you could describe the characters a lil bit more to give the reader a better image of the characters and surroundings. But other than that it's seems really good so far.

Yeah, I've always had some trouble with that, I'm probable going to edit that for such purposes.

Thanks!

[Kaworu, the Fifth Child]

No drunken sex. I approve. Lol, really good story! I like how you made Nekusar's servant be kind of sarcastic.

[xStrayKnightx]

Are you saying you disapprove of my drunken sex, Mishra?

[Ertai]

Are you saying you disapprove of my drunken sex, Mishra?

I literally asked the same question.

[Kaworu, the Fifth Child]

Are you saying you disapprove of my drunken sex, Mishra?

No. I just don't think it would fit this chapter.

[Kaworu, the Fifth Child]

Awww, Nekusar died...