Official Card Making

Started by FlickerYourOwnIdentity, March 31, 2013, 07:16:56 PM

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ntheawsome

Quote from: All-Mana Mania on March 31, 2013, 09:32:41 PM
After trying lazix, here is my final copy:

Lazix, Spirit Warrior

{W}{U}{G}

Legendary Creature-Spirit

Flying, Hexproof

Lazix is indestructible

Whenever Lazix attacks, put a 4/4 Warrior Tokens with onto the battlefield tapped and attacking, exile it at the end of your combat phase.

3/4


I really like it, I think it should be the progress leader. Because with his warriors coming onto the battlefield every turn, there is progress of killing the opponents creatures. I love it lol

IMHO, too much like Geist of Saint Traft

All-Mana Mania

Quote from: ntheawsome on March 31, 2013, 09:34:23 PM
Quote from: All-Mana Mania on March 31, 2013, 09:32:41 PM
After trying lazix, here is my final copy:

Lazix, Spirit Warrior

{W}{U}{G}

Legendary Creature-Spirit

Flying, Hexproof

Lazix is indestructible

Whenever Lazix attacks, put a 4/4 Warrior Tokens with onto the battlefield tapped and attacking, exile it at the end of your combat phase.

3/4


I really like it, I think it should be the progress leader. Because with his warriors coming onto the battlefield every turn, there is progress of killing the opponents creatures. I love it lol

IMHO, too much like Geist of Saint Traft


Wait, lemme change it. Lol

Birdbrain

Quote from: ntheawsome on March 31, 2013, 09:29:03 PM
{4}{G}{W}

Enchantment, Rare

At the begging of your upkeep, put a 1/1 green insect token onto the battlefield.

Ecobound- If you control three or more creature that don't share a creature type, put a 3/3 green beast creature token into the battlefield instead.
i like this. Though it would be interesting as a creature

All-Mana Mania


FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Quote from: Birdbrain on March 31, 2013, 09:11:31 PM
Quote from: ntheawsome on March 31, 2013, 09:10:26 PM
Player casts card with scroll

Scroll card is exiled before its printed text happens

Player can now pay scroll cost and remove a counter from the exiled card to cast a copy that allows printed text to take effect.
then it shouldn't have a cost for the scroll effect if it happens that way. Unless you pay the extra to put scroll counters on it
Ntheawesome is right.  How about the card can still get scroll counters put into it.

Birdbrain

Quote from: FlickerYourOwnIdentity on March 31, 2013, 09:41:54 PM
Quote from: Birdbrain on March 31, 2013, 09:11:31 PM
Quote from: ntheawsome on March 31, 2013, 09:10:26 PM
Player casts card with scroll

Scroll card is exiled before its printed text happens

Player can now pay scroll cost and remove a counter from the exiled card to cast a copy that allows printed text to take effect.
then it shouldn't have a cost for the scroll effect if it happens that way. Unless you pay the extra to put scroll counters on it
Ntheawesome is right.  How about the card can still get scroll counters put into it.
im just going to ask how. I'm not going to suggest anything

ntheawsome

QuoteNtheawesome is right.  How about the card can still get scroll counters put into it.

I like the idea of a rechargeable scroll card. Maybe make just a cycle of recharge scrolls?

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

We have that one support I made earlier, lemme modify it a bit to fit this better.

By the way guys remember progress got TRAPS!!!

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Quote from: ntheawsome on March 31, 2013, 09:34:23 PM
Quote from: All-Mana Mania on March 31, 2013, 09:32:41 PM
After trying lazix, here is my final copy:

Lazix, Spirit Warrior

{W}{U}{G}

Legendary Creature-Spirit

Flying, Hexproof

Lazix is indestructible

Whenever Lazix attacks, put a 4/4 Warrior Tokens with onto the battlefield tapped and attacking, exile it at the end of your combat phase.

3/4


I really like it, I think it should be the progress leader. Because with his warriors coming onto the battlefield every turn, there is progress of killing the opponents creatures. I love it lol

IMHO, too much like Geist of Saint Traft
I don't see any resemblance to progress.  I'm sorry,  plus I don't think this can even be a card.  We have to 2 extreme colors on each side on one card. 

Ageniv

{G}
Sudden Growth
Instant
Target creature gets +2/+2 until the end of the turn.
Scroll 1
{G}{G}

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Reimbursement                             {U}{U}{B}{X}


Sorcery                                          Mythic Rare

Distribute X number of scroll counters among any number of exiled spells with scroll.
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Thoughts?

All-Mana Mania

Quote from: FlickerYourOwnIdentity on March 31, 2013, 10:31:34 PM
Quote from: ntheawsome on March 31, 2013, 09:34:23 PM
Quote from: All-Mana Mania on March 31, 2013, 09:32:41 PM
After trying lazix, here is my final copy:

Lazix, Spirit Warrior

{W}{U}{G}

Legendary Creature-Spirit

Flying, Hexproof

Lazix is indestructible

Whenever Lazix attacks, put a 4/4 Warrior Tokens with onto the battlefield tapped and attacking, exile it at the end of your combat phase.

3/4


I really like it, I think it should be the progress leader. Because with his warriors coming onto the battlefield every turn, there is progress of killing the opponents creatures. I love it lol

IMHO, too much like Geist of Saint Traft
I don't see any resemblance to progress.  I'm sorry,  plus I don't think this can even be a card.  We have to 2 extreme colors on each side on one card.


Did you see the new one. And also progress has green in it. You vant make this side these colors and this side the other colors

ntheawsome

Quote from: FlickerYourOwnIdentity on March 31, 2013, 10:36:42 PM
Reimbursement                             {U}{U}{B}{X}


Sorcery                                          Mythic Rare

Distribute X number of scroll counters among any number of exiled spells with scroll.
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Thoughts?
I love the flexibility of scroll. More scroll shenanigans to come.

Time Pact          {3}{U}

Rare or mythic

Take an extra turn after this one. Target opponent takes an extra turn after his or her next turn.

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

I understand where your coming from, and I did say that, and the Alll colors are integrated on each side.  Some more then others.

Two things:

1. Spirits don't fit in the theme at all.  If they do, someone please point out where.

2. Sure green should be integrated into progress, but in a way that someone just looking at the cards can determine why it's there.  The story goes that although progress were highly intellectual, they lacked test subjects for their inventions.  Although the rare times in which they tested the invention on themselves, they went into the wild, and stole some of the wildlife, and brought them into their lab for testing.  Most of the time they were green aligned, and were turned into mutants, if not killed.  The mutants kept their strands of DNA that align them in green.  But now a blue and/or black strand of DNA has worked their way into the test subjects.

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Besides the secondary leader (in commander AFTER planeswalker) should not be a mix of the two extremes.  It wouldn't work.

FlickerYourOwnIdentity

Field of Discovery                       {F}{F}{U}{4}

Enchantment                              Rare


Whenever a nontoken creature enters the battlefield under your control, gain control of target creature.  It is a mutant in addition to its other types.


Flavor Text ~ "The plethora of specimen has dwindled down to nothing.  Maybe we should start searching for more on a different plot."

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I wanted to make something that went along with the story, so here you go!

EDIT:  in the mana cost, the 2 question mark boxes should be forests!