oloro! i need some help/opinions

[AdamS]

oloro! i need some help/opinions 100 cards, 0 sideboard 6 {Plains} 1 {Azorius Chancery} 1 {Arcane Sanctum} 6 {Swamp} 1 {Command Tower} 1 {Transguild Promenade} 1 {Esper Panorama} 1 {Dimir Guildgate} 1 {Opal Palace} 1 {Orzhov Basilica} 1 {Temple of the False God} 1 {Orzhov Guildgate} 1 {Rupture Spire} 1 {Ancient Tomb} 1 {Jwar Isle Refuge} 1 {Lonely Sandbar} 1 {Azorius Guildgate} 5 {Island} 1 {Barren Moor} 33 lands 1 {Sphinx of the Steel Wind} 1 {Butcher of Malakir} 1 {Disciple of Griselbrand} 1 {Sharding Sphinx} 1 {Augury Adept} 1 {Wall of Reverence} 1 {Tidal Force} 1 {Tower Gargoyle} 1 {Arbiter of the Ideal} 1 {Divinity of Pride} 1 {Mikaeus, the Unhallowed} 1 {Grand Abolisher} 1 {Filigree Angel} 1 {Diviner Spirit} 1 {Disciple of Griselbrand} 1 {Rhox Faithmender} 1 {Tromokratis} 1 {Meletis Charlatan} 1 {Vish Kal, Blood Arbiter} 1 {Elite Arcanist} 1 {Vizkopa Guildmage} 1 {Serene Master} 1 {Wall of Reverence} 1 {Ajani's Pridemate} 1 {It That Betrays} 1 {Stormscape Battlemage} 1 {Phyrexian Gargantua} 1 {Tidehollow Strix} 1 {Myr Battlesphere} 1 {Pawn of Ulamog} 1 {Requiem Angel} 1 {Serra Avatar} 1 {Bloodgift Demon} 1 {Serra Avatar} 34 creatures 1 {Jace, Memory Adept} 1 {Whip of Erebos} 1 {Nevinyrral's Disk} 1 {Ajani Goldmane} 1 {Death Grasp} 1 {Merciless Eviction} 1 {Sol Ring} 1 {Storm Herd} 1 {Greed} 1 {Nihil Spellbomb} 1 {Jace Beleren} 1 {Quicksilver Amulet} 1 {Spinal Embrace} 1 {Pristine Talisman} 1 {Brilliant Plan} 1 {Sun Droplet} 1 {Dark Ritual} 1 {Crawlspace} 1 {Dromar's Charm} 1 {Grave Pact} 1 {Lim-Dûl's Vault} 1 {Well of Lost Dreams} 1 {Curse of Inertia} 1 {Curse of the Forsaken} 1 {Brilliant Plan} 1 {Exquisite Blood} 1 {Sanguine Bond} 1 {Darksteel Mutation} 1 {Phyrexian Reclamation} 1 {Phyrexian Arena} 1 {Deep Analysis} 1 {Curse of Shallow Graves} 1 {Cradle of Vitality} 33 other spells Sideboard Notes: do you think it could win a tournament as it is im entering one april 28th and i need some opinions on how well it will do. and what should i cut

[Sparkle Ninja]

You need some tutors and cards like {temporal extortion} that give you extra turns