Sonnet Contest!

[Birdbrain]

After re-reading it, I'm only missing a rhyme in the first sentence. I'll fix it again

[blackychan1]

No winner?

[Birdbrain]

No winner?

i was the only one that entered so I guess so

[IntoFire]

Come on guys, let your creative juices flow! There must be a special someone you want to express your feelings to. Now's the time.

[IntoFire]

For more inspiration, I wrote this one:

"Ponder"

I look back upon my past,
I remember your resounding grace.
The look on your face when I said: "I love you"
And all of it was to be true.

And now look where we are,
Spending eternity together.
The sense that we could be forever
It begs the question: "Have we been lovers before?"

I close my eyes as I do not know.
I, the thinker, am at a loss for words.
For whenever I see , I ask myself: "Why is she so appealing?"
I do not know, but I do know this:

"Our love in not ephemeral, it is eternal"

[abstractApathist]

Wrote this a while ago when I was feeling pretty dark (don't worry, I promise I'm a happy person):





The room is full of poisoned fluidness.
Before it's known, the depth, the legs stumbled,
To cry unto the floor at own behest,
Each tear, a drop in glass, a man crumbled.

The cool of night is pierced by flitting fire.
From hand to mouth the eerie light flickers.
Its owner knows and naught but its desire,
And to resist, the mind, with self, bickers.

The chilling silence shattered, glass in shards.
Through void, a hand has reached, heart pounding
In darkness, anxious, mind a house of cards.
A crack of thunder; silence resounding.

The world, though light inside, shows darker marks,
And humans, lost but seeking, cling to sparks.

[Skyshadow731]

we not only miss you
but the love is there
as we watch you slip through
the stands of our hair

hes was not only the one
he was someone who love
he love everything and everyone
but love wasnt enough to stop you from flying like a dove

as i look back at the time that has passed
it has revealed that it is nothing but number
as god picked you for his cast
he had to put you to a permanent slumber

time is best well spent by loving
as loving has prevented this world from caving

im not sure if this is corect but i hope it is. and i just made this and its about my father

[IntoFire]

I these are all, then I will announce the winner tomorrow.

[Skyshadow731]

Do we have a winner yet. And do we win anything if we win. I'm just asking

[Skyshadow731]

Never mind. If possible I would love to be in 2nd place

[abstractApathist]

Do we have a winner yet. And do we win anything if we win. I'm just asking

If you look at the original post, the prizes are listed. I too am curious to know the winners, however.

[IntoFire]

Actually, I changed the prize o be anything you wat from my TB.That's for first place. Second will get 2 packs of Theros and third will get one.

[Birdbrain]

I still want to be in the running, but if I win anything, divvy it up between coffee vampire and nightwolf

And if I get third, I'll send money for a second pack

[abstractApathist]

If these are all, then I will announce the winner tomorrow.

It's been almost a week. Are you going to say who won?

[IntoFire]

First: {abstractApathist}
Second:{Birdbrain}
Third:{Skyshadow731}