Chapter 1: Origins

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FlickerYourOwnIdentity
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July 29, 2013, 10:47:04 PM
I wanted to write a fanfiction about the origins of the Multiverse.  I plan to continue this weekly.

A fanfiction is an interesting speculation about what could happen about most anything.  It could be about a TV show, and what you think could, or should have happened.  Look at Whitedrake's contests, they are about us writing fanfictions about mtg.  So I wanted to do a series for fun! :)

Rating: P-G 
The rating is only for this story, they might change in later stories from P-G -to- M.

Please note, the main character is mapping in the Blind Eternities in the beginning.  Please go look it up, if you don't know what that is.

Enjoy! :)
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Chapter 1: Origins


  The world is blank, yet chaotic.  Consumed in fire, yet drowning in ice water.  Freezing gales are matched by scorching heats.  The stone ground is jagged, and loose like the sands.  Time pays no mind here, as time warps open, and close as they please.  It is a never-ending expanse, and yet it feels claustrophobic.  A crowded and lonely place for its sole resident.  The Spark.

  The Spark has lived through many eternities, all-knowing and all-powerful.  He could create and destroy as he pleased, but he never did.  Instead he roamed instead, mapping out the endless expanse in his mind.  He is indifferent to his surrounding chaos as he roams.  He walked, then scanned his surroundings, locking them in his mind, then moves on.  He became easily bored, but he ignored his stream of extravagant ideas.  Continuing on with his drab routine.  Although, everything changed one day.

  The Spark mustered up his immense power, as he directed it at the expanse that he had mapped out.  After making an outline of his map, he made a powerful dome of protection.  He encased the plane in the force field, so strong that nothing, except for him could get through.  He stepped through the force field as he scanned his closed off space.

  The skies were rivers of lava, and the ground was oceans sand.  He frowned, summoning up even more of his power.  He released his energy with such a burst, it lay waste to all on the plane.  The skies were white, and endless.  As was the ground.  The Spark floated in the area of nothingness as the mustered power from the wells of energy within him, giving the nothingness a grassy field.  Then he made a blue sky, with clouds so ethereal.  He then rest upon the ground for a single day.  The first sleep he has had since he began his eternity.  

  On the second day, The Spark rose, using power from the very land he stood upon.  He created an elixir of power, known as mana.  He made oceans, swamps, forests, plateaus, plains, mountains, valleys, and so much more.  All contained one of the six colors of mana, the elixir of power.  The Spark drank in upon the newfound power, renewing his strength.  He then gathered more power to fill the plane with life.  He made various species, all unique in their own special way.  Each species roamed their new home, immediately growing a dislike for their opposing species.  The Spark noticed this flaw, then separated the animals from each other.  They each marked their new territory, and continued on with their life.  Exhausted, The Spark fell upon the grass, and slept.

  On the third day, he created a massive building of marble.  The building inhabited all mana, made as a home of refuge to all who needed.  Then he realized what should really be there.  He mustered every fiber of power from his body, and made his most powerful creations.  After days of work, he must have created millions of the new species of lifeforms.  He smiled with pride until he looked closer at his new creations.  They looked lost, and scared.  So he gave each new life form a false memory.  Each one inhabited a trait of The Spark's.  Defiant, devious, knowledge seeking, curious, innocent, evil, abusive, exploration, imaginative, power hungry, and so many more.  Each life form had a special trait, or goal, and each one was unique.  

  The Spark felt drained of power, he was weak and needed rest.  Except he saw an imperfection, and knew he had to attend to it now.  They were all weak.  He sighed as he walked up to each creature, and gave each one a piece of his inner spark.  The Spark's power coursed through the veins of the beings, as they flocked to the building of refuge to retrieve power.  The building became crowded, The Spark soon began to die out.  He knew what had to be done as he looked at the last creature that didn't receive the spark.  He realized that he was the creature of innovation, and smiled.

  "Your name shall be Urza, and you shall begin it all." He said, giving the remaining power to Urza.  The Spark fizzled, and died, as Urza grew to a power, not attained by the others.  Urza strode up to the building of marble, an milked the power of the mana.  He felt mighty, he felt smart, and he felt like he knew what to do.  He smiled as he stepped to the highest point in the building.  He cleared his throat so loud it boomed throughout the building.  The powerful creatures looked up at him.

  "My name is Urza, and I bear a message from our creator." He said.  The creatures looked at him in wonder, some in disgust, but they did listen.

  "Fellow Planeswalkers..."


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To be continued....
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Well guys what did you think, this wasn't my best work, and I shall do better next chapter!

Leave comments and ideas below.  If you are writing a fanfiction, if you want some help, pm me.  I would be glad to assist. :)



whitedrake
Boss 100
July 30, 2013, 12:54:12 AM
Flicker I really like it...;) nice job done here... ;)



Melek the fire
User 8
July 31, 2013, 10:32:52 PM
Very cool interesting take on how it all started. Very genesis like haha



Mizark
User+ 34
August 01, 2013, 01:41:37 PM
I like it !!
I really enjoy the fact that u have Urza in there 😄



Birdbrain
User 100
August 01, 2013, 01:59:10 PM
Can I start a story?



FlickerYourOwnIdentity
User 100
August 01, 2013, 02:43:50 PM
Can I start a story?
Off of this?



Apathy Reactor
User 100
August 08, 2013, 02:40:51 PM
Can I start a story?
Off of this?
no. My own unique story
lol you don't have to ask permission to write a story XD



FlickerYourOwnIdentity
User 100
August 08, 2013, 11:33:09 PM
Yup, this is a free country after all! :)

Sorry, I haven't been available for awhile.  I leave at 6:00 am in the mornings, and get back at 11:00pm at the moment.  Due to band camp.  So I haven't been able to come on lately, and write more.  I will post a new story as soon as possible.



Mlerner12
User 58
August 14, 2013, 08:24:27 PM
Can I request Ral Zarek to be in the next one to say something witty? All I want, a Zarek witty line somewhere. If that's okay 😉



FlickerYourOwnIdentity
User 100
August 14, 2013, 11:11:40 PM
Can I request Ral Zarek to be in the next one to say something witty? All I want, a Zarek witty line somewhere. If that's okay 😉
Nope, not his feature time yet.



Mlerner12
User 58
August 14, 2013, 11:28:06 PM
Can I request Ral Zarek to be in the next one to say something witty? All I want, a Zarek witty line somewhere. If that's okay 😉
Nope, not his feature time yet.

At some point in some time can he make a witty comment?



FlickerYourOwnIdentity
User 100
August 14, 2013, 11:37:21 PM
Can I request Ral Zarek to be in the next one to say something witty? All I want, a Zarek witty line somewhere. If that's okay 😉
Nope, not his feature time yet.

At some point in some time can he make a witty comment?
You'll see...



Mlerner12
User 58
August 14, 2013, 11:46:46 PM
Can I request Ral Zarek to be in the next one to say something witty? All I want, a Zarek witty line somewhere. If that's okay 😉
Nope, not his feature time yet.

At some point in some time can he make a witty comment?
You'll see...

I literally WORSHIP Ral Zarek.



Gorzo
Boss 100
August 15, 2013, 04:09:14 AM
Literally? :|



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